Sunday, May 6, 2012

Subtle

Dark eyes
Simple lines
Easy times
And clear-sky nights
Subtle smile
Like a child's
Hearts grow wild-
You could be mine. :)
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4 comments:

  1. KatieLarisaMay 7, 2012 at 9:40 AM

    This is amazing Kath, they all are, but for some reason this one plucked at my heartstrings more than the others :) Love you Kath! <3

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  2. Alexa BoltonMay 7, 2012 at 12:06 PM

    Love this poem Kath! Love the rhythm and rhyme for sure :) the simplicity of the language, but depth within the meaning and images made me smile :)

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  3. YeseniaMay 7, 2012 at 5:04 PM

    Pienso, este poema va mucho más alla de las palabras. Despierta en el lector la oportunidad de crear un ser en su mente. Yo al leerlo, pensé en un anciano, quizas un abuelo, o un hombre que anda por la vida regalando sonrisas que envuelven experiencias.

    Grandiosa. Eres muy talentosa.

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  4. Aidyl EwohMay 25, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    Aw, this one is sweet.
    ~Aidyl

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